f/k/a . . .

remaining heat
the frayed edge
of a salesman’s tie

 

 

 

 

 

dwindling light
my childhood home
a parking lot

 

 

 

 

 

 

long shadows
many places
to cross the creek

 

 

 

 

the car packed
one last pebble
cast into the sea

 

 

paul m from The Heron’s Nest - a haikai journal

“remaining heat“  Sept. 2004; “the car packed” Sept. 2003

“dwindling light“  May 2003; “long shadows“   Dec. 2003

 

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  by dagosan: 

parked on the shoulder

in a driving rain –

our flashers dim

 

[July 5, 2005]

p.s. Hello, Ana!  Don’t forget this driving pointer for Will.

 

                                                                                                                                                                           

remaining heat
the frayed edge
of a salesman’s tie

 

 

 

 

 

dwindling light
my childhood home
a parking lot

 

 

 

 

 

 

long shadows
many places
to cross the creek

 

 

 

 

the car packed
one last pebble
cast into the sea

 

 

paul m from The Heron’s Nest - a haikai journal

“remaining heat“  Sept. 2004; “the car packed” Sept. 2003

“dwindling light“  May 2003; “long shadows“   Dec. 2003

 

• 
  
  by dagosan: 

parked on the shoulder

in a driving rain –

our flashers dim

 

[July 5, 2005]

p.s. Hello, Ana!  Don’t forget this driving pointer for Will.