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June 27, 2005

david giacalone: haiku and senryu (2004)

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 1:28 pm

 


– below are haiku and senryu written by this weblog’s Editor, David A. Giacalone.  They first appeared on the f/k/a homepage, under the name “dagosan”the unedited daily offerings from dagosan can be found in his  ”scrapbooks” by going to the dagosan archives page –


 


                                                                                                                               crows



sleet turns to rain -

snow buddha’s visit

cut short

                            [Dec. 31, 2004]

 



 

 


 
 

 


one smirking

snowman

one hatless scarecrow

 

                                [Dec. 30, 2004] 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

children awash

in christmas gifts –

tsunami on tv

 



      [Dec. 28, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 


coins inside the walnuts -

great-grandchildren

cracking a smile
                              [Dec. 27, 2004, for Grandpa Bart] 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

cross words over turkey

over parenting –

the Yule log burns


                              [Dec. 26, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


a sleigh-shaped cloud

floats by -

Christmas morning blue sky   

                                                        [Dec. 25, 2004]    

 

 



 

 

 


Nana serves

Grandma’s recipes —

Christmas Eve calamari    

                                                        [Dec. 24, 2004]       

 

 

 

 

 


 

 

 

 

 

two-hour backup –

just past the accident,

Christmas Eve rainbow

 

 

 

 

 

 
 

wrapping and

packing–

she pastes on a smile


                                             [Dec. 22, 2004]

 

 

 

 




  






married a decade

she hides

the mistletoe

 

 





married a decade

he buys

new mistletoe

                                                     [Dec. 20, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


wind chill zero

outside the high school

not one jacket zipped

                                   [Dec. 18, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


3 am nature call–

the nagging drip

of icicles

                    [Dec. 17, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

 


fogged window -

too cold

meets too hot

                                   [Dec. 15, 2004]

 

 

 










winter wind

rattles the windows -

the fridge hums louder

 

                                   [Dec. 14, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


birthday phone call -

your triple bypass

trumps my bad knee

 

                                            [Dec. 13, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 


waiting room -

the masked man

brings his own magazine


                               [Dec. 11, 2004]

 

 


 


eyelid lightshow –

he hits the snooze button

one more time


                              [Dec. 10, 2004]





 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Sunday morning

omelet

for one

 

 



a single

mimosa

- hold the toast

  

 

 

 

 

 



two strawberry blondes

lean into the wind -

cattails lean with it                                        

                                          [Dec. 4, 2004] 


 

 

 

 

 
snow falls

from a low gray sky -

she lifts the sauce pan lid

 

                           [Dec. 3, 2004] 

 

 



 

a favorite tree

reflected in the river -


made me look again

                                            [Dec. 2, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the river mirrors

the busy bridge -

one duck races the cars

                                            [Dec. 1, 2004]

 

 

 







under nana’s afghan -

dreaming homemade 

bread and meatballs


                                                   [Nov 30, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the shower massage

finds her navel -

Buddha smile                                

                                    [Nov 23, 2004] 






 


 


 


 


 





rainy night drive –

squinting at glare 

through dad’s eyes

                             [Nov 21, 2004]






 

 

 

 

 

 

 

clogged drain–

300-pound plumber

under the sink

   

                                        [Nov.20, 2004] 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


sitting to meditate-

toilet and nose

start to run


                        [Nov. 15, 2004]


 

 




waving from the river bank

waving back

cattails

               [Nov. 13, 2004]



 

 

 

 

 


 





handful of pawns

protect the king -

Veterans Day




                              [Nov.11, 2004



  


 


 


even lovelier

naked

backyard elm

 

                 [Nov. 10, 2004]    

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

almost sunset -

mottled clouds

blush at my stare 

                                [Nov 7, 2004]  

 



 


 


 

 

 


election over

dirty laundry

awaits

 

                 [Nov. 4, 2004]







 

 

 

 

 


 

 

 




candy for goblins

disappears early –

sneaking out to buy more

 

                                [Oct. 28, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Hunter's Moon sm:

Lunar Eclipse [and World Series] Sequence

 

 



eclipse tonight –

no cover

no rain date

 




full moon

encircled by clouds

– awaiting the hunter

 

 

 

 






pumpkin

floating in the river

Hunter’s Moon

 

 











wow, it’s orange!

tawny, she corrects

_ _ Blood Moon



 

 

 

 

 

 

out of the

         shadow 

              redstockings





 







                            [October 28, 2004]



 

 


 



first night at her place -

three-dog gal

no-dog guy

                         [Oct. 26, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



toilet seat up -

bedroom

suddenly chilly

                          [Oct. 25, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 





another stray dog

finds

her

                    [Oct. 23, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 








alongside

the silent crew scull -

coach’s angry bullhorn          

                                                 [Oct. 19, 2004] 

 

 

 







cold fingers –

sitting on my hands

before touching hers                       

                                              [Oct. 18, 2004]




 

 

 

 

 

 

 





first date:

she groans with pleasure

. . .  at my pun

                            [Oct. 20, 2004]




 

  

 

 

 

              

 

 


the stale air

of an old man’s home –

opening my front door

                                       [Oct. 21, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 





 

 

health food store:

unnatural sneeze

in the candle aisle

                                    [Oct. 16, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 






 

 

 


expecting rain,

smiling at

the blue sky


                            [Oct. 14, 2004] 

      

 

 

 

                 

 

Columbus Day trip


red and yellow crayons

turn into stubs

                           

                                          [Oct. 12, 2004]

 








 

 


 

waking too late

to see the dawn

- he pencils-in sunset


                                           [Oct. 7, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 



 



blinds open

to the midday sun -

summer’s gone                   


                     [Oct. 1, 2004]


 


 

 

 




 

just before

the pale orange moon

a bright orange sky

                                [Sept. 28, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 










harvest moon

over Wal-Mart –

schlepping groceries    

                                           [Spet. 26, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


no coffee brewing

no scent of love –

the hermit wakes


 

                                            [Sept. 25, 2004]













 

 

 

 

 

 

 


visiting mom and dad –

faces and refrains

gettin’ old

           

                                  [Sept. 22 & 26,, 2004] 






 

 

 

 

 

 

last day of summer -

the old cat naps

in the sunny window         

                                        [Sept. 21, 2004] 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

caught hiding the stash -

colombian

caffeine 

                                           [Sept. 19, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

street closed

for the Saturday Faire

the only sound is rain


 

                                           [Sept. 18, 2004]

 









 

 

October peonies -
still perfect
from the curb  
                




[Sept. 15, 2004]

 


 


 



supine at noon

sunshine spotlights

one big toe


[Sept. 14, 2004]



 


 


 


a breeze! 

a draft!

the window fan stirs debate       

 

                                    [Sept. 13, 2004] 




the double amputee

winces 


[Sept. 11, 2004]

 








              

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

first day of school

bus stop horseplay 

wakes the empty-nester

               

                              [Sept. 7, 2004]

 

 

 



 

 

 


hand-in-hand

until

the mosquito mugging

                                  [Sept. 3, 2004]

 

 

 

 







 

Labor Day

the parade starts and ends

at the mall

 

                         [Sept. 2, 2004]

 

 




 


 


ancient snapshot

their last smiles

for the camera

 

                         [Sept. 1, 2004]

 

 








 

 

 

 

 

 


soap-stung eyes —

an eight-year-old’s face

flashes in the mirror

           

                                        [Aug. 28, 2004] 





 


 






 

just below

the “riverview apartment” –

ten ripe garbage cans

           

                                        [Aug. 27, 2004] 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



honking at my window –

geese above

cabbie below

                        [Sept. 19, 2004]

 

 



 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


sleepless night

she won’t stop

leaving me alone            

                                        [Aug. 21, 2004] 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

clock tower with crescent moon

–  only the moon

follows us home                           



                 [Aug. 20, 2004] 

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 


typing stops –

laptop activist

gets off his butt                          



[Aug. 17, 2004]



 

 

 

their babies

never cry

never stop crying


[Aug, 25, 2004, for Dafur's victims]      

 

 

 

 

 


the garbage bag lands –

squirrel and I 

startle eachother

                                      [08-13-04] 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 




to-read list

and summer corn

growing, growing

 


                         [Aug. 12, 2004]

                                 Legal Studies Forum XXIX:1 (2005) 

 




 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 





tailgater

     passing on a sharp curve –

take a deep breath




[Aug. 8, 2004]

 

 




waking, the agnostic asks

who dried the dishes

and hung that sun? 


                                   [Aug. 6, 2004]

                                           Legal Studies Forum XXIX:1 (2005) 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

a good pout

rudely interrupted

by impatiens

                          [Aug. 5, 2004]

 







 

 

 


a welcome smile

from the past –

obituary photo

                                [08-01-04]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

old dog and master

jostling

for the tiny spot of shade

    

                  [07-31-04]

                  Legal Studies Forum XXIX:1 (2005) 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
cursing

the unset alarm clock -

late for church again

                                                  [07-30-04]

 




 



 

waking from a young man’s dream

last night’s body

creaks and groans

                                              [7-27-04]

 




 

 

 




in bed 

alone

with a nagging back

                                   [7-25-04]

 

 

 

 

 

 

July escape -

pensioner parked

      in front of a fan

                                             [07-22-04]

 




 

 

 

 

 

 

idling

at my bedroom window 

the garbage truck    

                                [07-20-04]

 

 

 

 



 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the old man stops

at a green light

driving into the sunset                       

                                                [7-17-04]






 

 

 

 
jaws clenched

writing

haiku

             [07-16-04]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



mottled gray sky

impatiens

grow louder                        [7-15-04]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

false dawn

the paperboy hits

the snooze button                        [7-14-04]

 


 

 

 

 

 

empty punchbowl:

husband and wife

avoid the mistletoe

                              [7-13-04]   

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


arm too short