Comments on: is it or ain’t it haiku? http://blogs.law.harvard.edu/ethicalesq "breathless punditry" and "one-breath poetry" with David Giacalone Fri, 25 Jul 2008 09:20:49 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=wordpress-mu-1.2.1 By: David Giacalone http://blogs.law.harvard.edu/ethicalesq/is-it-or-aint-it-haiku/#comment-184024 David Giacalone Thu, 10 Jul 2008 11:54:16 +0000 http://blogs.law.harvard.edu/ethicalesq/is-it-or-aint-it-haiku/#comment-184024 Martin, the subject looks like a traditional one for haiku -- skipping a stone off the reflection on a body of water. Did you write a one-liner on purpose or have trouble formatting in the Comment Box? In general, I find one-liners to be unnecessarily distracting without adding to the reader's enjoyment or understanding. Martin, the subject looks like a traditional one for haiku — skipping a stone off the reflection on a body of water.

Did you write a one-liner on purpose or have trouble formatting in the Comment Box? In general, I find one-liners to be unnecessarily distracting without adding to the reader’s enjoyment or understanding.

]]> By: martin http://blogs.law.harvard.edu/ethicalesq/is-it-or-aint-it-haiku/#comment-184001 martin Thu, 10 Jul 2008 02:31:46 +0000 http://blogs.law.harvard.edu/ethicalesq/is-it-or-aint-it-haiku/#comment-184001 I would like your opinion. What would you call this attempt? the stone skips through the sunlit peak and moon I would like your opinion. What would you call this attempt?

the stone skips through the sunlit peak and moon

]]> By: electraglide http://blogs.law.harvard.edu/ethicalesq/is-it-or-aint-it-haiku/#comment-52036 electraglide Fri, 21 Sep 2007 17:07:07 +0000 http://blogs.law.harvard.edu/ethicalesq/is-it-or-aint-it-haiku/#comment-52036 winter pond a frog jumps in sound of bouncing :) enjoyed this page a lot thanks! winter pond
a frog jumps in
sound of bouncing :)

enjoyed this page
a lot thanks!

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