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October 26, 2004

dagosan’s scrapbook - 2004 pt. 1

Filed under: pre-06-2006 — David Giacalone @ 6:37 pm

 


- below are haiku and senryu written by “dagosan”, this weblog’s Editor, David A. Giacalone. most have been on the Home Page, some are outtakes and rewrites. each is a work in progress. i hope they show improvement over time and encourage others to try writing haiku -


 - click here for dagosan’s archive index -



 

 



another stray dog

finds

her

                    [Oct. 23, 2004]

 

 

 

 






just one glass of wine:

Google keeps asking

“Did you mean ______?”

 

                                 [for e, Oct. 23, 2004]

 

 

 

 

alongside

the silent crew scull -

coach’s angry bullhorn          

                                                 [Oct. 19, 2004] 

 

 

 

 

 







cold fingers –

sitting on my hands

before touching hers                       

                                              [Oct. 18, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 




 





first date:

she groans with pleasure

. . .  at my pun

                            [Oct. 20, 2004]




 

                   [election reactions:

 



late October 

tv on

sound off

 

 

 





“Entering Goose Creek”

the candidate

covers his behind

 

 

 

 

 


behind the bush -

bishops

goose-stepping            

 

Oct. 22, 2004 ]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


the stale air

of an old man’s home –

opening my front door

                                       [Oct. 21, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 





seatbelts click –

wrinkles in the fabric

of freedom

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


she eyes his wrinkled shirt –


a seatbelt saves

another life

                                [Oct. 16, 2004] 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

health food store:

unnatural sneeze

in the candle aisle

                                    [Oct. 16, 2004]

 

 





 

 

 

 

 

 

 


awake enough to notice

everything

still hurts


                            [Oct. 15, 2004] 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


expecting rain,

smiling at

the blue sky


                            [Oct. 14, 2004] 

                       

 

 

 

 

 

 









holy-card clouds


in leaf-peeper heaven

– New Jersey

                           

                                              [Oct. 13, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Columbus Day trip


red and yellow crayons

turn into stubs

                           

                                          [Oct. 12, 2004]

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

place cards –


the aging bachelor dines 

with aunts, not bride’s maids

                           

                                           [Oct. 11, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 









after corn on the cob

the photo album

- bittersweet


                           [Oct. 8, 2004]

 

 

 


 

 

 

 

 

 

waking too late

to see the dawn

- he pencils-in sunset


                                           [Oct. 7, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

cute waitress -

no protest

when we say we’re old

           

                                        [Oct. 6, 2004] 

 

 

 

 

 

 

October sun

warms the bed

where’s that winter robe?

                                     [Oct. 5, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

 

waking to Pledge Week -

beggars and bullies 

on the radio

                                [Oct. 4, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

no nap

nor stroll

the writer grinding teeth

 


                                                [Oct. 3, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 



blinds open

to the midday sun -

summer’s gone                   


                     [Oct. 1, 2004]


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

thanks a lot,

clouds -

no moonshadow tonight


                                                  [Sept. 29, 2004]




 

 

 

 

 

 

 

just before

the pale orange moon

a bright orange sky

                                [Sept. 28, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

rave reviews

for the lighting crew -

harvest moon

                              [Sept. 27, 2004]


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

bathroom

exhaust fan

exhausted

                       [Sept. 27, 2004]







 

A.M.

scat, sun


clouds, too!


harvest moon comes tonight 


 

P.M.


harvest moon

over Wal-Mart –

schlepping groceries    

                                         [Spet. 26, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


no coffee brewing

no scent of love

to wake the hermit


 

                                                  [Sept. 25, 2004]


 

 

 

 

parents’ new home:

old bladders

one bathroom

                                 [Sept. 24, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

siblings’ kids -

comparing their laughs,

our bald spots                   




[Sept. 25, 2004]








 

 

 

 

 

 

 

visiting mom and dad

faces and refrains

gettin’ old

           

                                        [Sept. 22 & 26,, 2004] 






 

 

 

 

 

 

 

last day of summer -

the old cat naps

in the sunny window         

                                        [Sept. 21, 2004] 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

equinox stroll:

cold fingers

and sunglasses

                                             [Sept. 21, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

caught hiding the stash -

colombian

caffeine 

                                           [Sept. 19, 2004]

 

  . . . . . 

 

street closed

for the Saturday Faire

the only sound is rain


 

                                           [Sept. 18, 2004]

 


 


 


 


 



unsummer day:

crisp morning

long, hot shower

                                          [Sept. 17, 2004]

 


 


 


 



ceo and counsel

deposit their checks –

none for the pensioner    

  

                                                 [Sept. 16, 2004, for bjg] 








 

 

 

 

 

 

October peonies -
still perfect
from the curb  
                




[Sept. 15, 2004]

 


 


 


 



supine at noon

sunshine spotlights

one big toe


[Sept. 14, 2004]

 


 


 


 


 


a breeze! 

a draft!

the window fan stirs debate     

  

                                                 [Sept. 13, 2004] 

 


 


 


 


september 12

sunshine

and hurricanes

                                      

                                      [Sept. 12, 2004]

 

 

 

 

missing legs:

the double amputee

winces 


[Sept. 11, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

hearing her pleas

recalling

her lies

 

            [Sept. 10, 2004]  

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

laundry day

more steps

than last week


                            

             [Sept. 9, 2004]




 


 


 


 


 



not a dream

the mirror reflects

yesterday’s bad haircut

         

                                          [Sept. 8, 2004]

              

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

first day of school

bus stop horseplay 

wakes the empty-nester

               

             [Sept. 7, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



no hot water -

fogless

mirror

          

                                        [Sept. 5, 2004] 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


 

filing nails

folding briefs

the retired lawyer           

                                        [Sept. 4, 2004] 









 

 

 

 

 


hand-in-hand

until

the mosquito mugging

                                  [Sept. 3, 2004]







 

 

 

 

 

 

Labor Day

the parade ends

at the mall

 

                         [Sept. 2, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


Republicans

and syllables –

fewer is better

                      [Sept. 2, 2004, for Madeleine Kane]

 

 

 

 

ancient snapshot

their last smiles

for the camera

 

                         [Sept. 1, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


“MRI negative” –

the same

jolt of pain                        



[Aug. 30, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 






extra-long shower –

haiku moments

down the drain

                              [Aug. 29, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


soap-stung eyes —

an eight-year-old’s face

flashes in the mirror

           

                                        [Aug. 28, 2004] 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

cement truck?

washing machine?

inside the MRI

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

orange, yellow, pink

what would you name this rose?

Day Breaker                         



[Aug. 24, 2004]

 





 

 

 

 

 

just below

the “riverview apartment” –

ten ripe garbage cans

           

                                        [Aug. 27, 2004] 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


the groom’s family

poses

at the bride’s family plot

 

                             [Aug. 26, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



honking at my window –

geese above

cabbie below

                        [Sept. 19, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



honking at my window –

frowns for the cabbie

smiles for the geese
                                                       [08-23-04]

 

 

 

 

 

 


sleepless night

she won’t stop

leaving me alone            

                                        [Aug. 21, 2004] 

 

 

 

 

 

 

clock tower with crescent moon

–  only the moon

follows us home                           



                 [Aug. 20, 2004] 

 

 

 

 

 

 


web-server down: 


bugs but no net

                                      [Aug. 19, 2004] 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


typing stops –

laptop activist

gets off his butt                          



[Aug. 17, 2004]



 

 

[for Dafur’s victims]

 

their babies

never cry

never stop crying


[Aug, 25, 2004]       

 

 

 

 

 

 

it is!   it isn’t!

genocide - -

just stop it         

                  [Aug. 16, 2004]








 

 

 

 

 

 

GameBoy off –

father and son 

same show, same laugh


                                            [Aug. 15, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

baker’s dozen

bagels — we eschew

triskaidekaphobia




[Fri., Aug.13, 2004] 

 

 

 

 

 


the garbage bag lands –

squirrel and I 

startle eachother

                                      [08-13-04] 

 

 

 

 

 

 




to-read list

and summer corn

growing, growing

 


                                [Aug. 12, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 




a good nap

rudely interrupted -

Urgent mail   

                                              [08-10-04]




 

 

 

 

 

 

 

two flat tires and

a broken lug wrench:

the shy neighbor asks for help

    

                                                       [08-09-04]

 

 

 

 

 

 





tailgater

     passing on a sharp curve –

take a deep breath




[Aug. 8, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


flawless hosta  

between finger and thumb –

it’s real!

                                             [Aug. 7, 2004]

 

 

 

 

waking, the agnostic asks

who dried the dishes

and hung that sun? 


                                   [Aug. 6, 2004]

                                           Legal Studies Forum XXIX:1 (2005) 


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

a good pout

rudely interrupted

by impatiens

                          [Aug. 5, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
mailing the letter

to the editor

making points, enemies

                                   [Aug. 5, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 










last night’s gentle breeze

chilly at dawn: 

bedroom fan

    

                                                       [08-04-04]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


hardboiled mystery:

one peels easily

one doesn’t

                                 [Aug. 3, 2004]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

tossing all night –

bedtime meds  

nestled in the pill box            [Aug. 2, 2004]


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


a welcome smile

from the past –

obituary photo

                                [08-01-04]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

old dog and master

jostling

for the tiny spot of shade

    

                        [07-31-04]

                        Legal Studies Forum XXIX:1 (2005) 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 
cursing

the unset alarm clock -

late for church again

                                                  [07-30-04]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


cycle of life?

human stain?

another laundry day

                                               [07-29-04]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 



 

waking from a young man’s dream

last night’s body

creaks and groans

                                              [7-27-04]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


laptop warranty 

expires today -

surfing without a net                [7-27-04]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 


undecided:

the insomniac sleeps through

the acceptance speech    

                                                       [07-26-04]

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

the boys grudgingly

share the hanging tire -

swing doters    

                                                       [07-26-04]